Vintage style advert

I was asked by work to create some vintage style adverts and heres my first attempt, im unsure as always but let me know of things youd change pls

Alpine Log Cabin Logo

Log design I have to say is one of my favorites. The old alpine logo you could say is rather dated so i was asked if i could create a more modern logo, Check the old one out yourself….

Old Alpine Logo

Fitch Logo

Whilst doodling on some paper I started to create an unusual pattern without even realising what I was doing. When I looked down I was amazed to see what I had actually drawn and quickly set about applying this style to a logo. Below is the final version i hope to expand this into a larger illustration.
I would love to to hear your comments on it…